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Subject: Tainted Soul
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nuqi 16.11.11 - 01:56pm
As night breaks,
My life begins to crumble
And all hope fades to dust,
I knock on heavens door
Hoping for hells angel to ease my sorrow,
Now and forever i hope she comes tomorrow.
Thoughts far beyond this life
Encroach my mind, its shadow I must follow.
My dead heart beats thump,
Lifes promise will never reign,
Deep breaths relinquish this mindless cancer,
Like fallen hail, my heart has sunken
Beneath this heathen soil,
Spoiled with grief this lifes bliss
Is tainted with the solemness of days.
The hell raiser sees his rise
As the blade divides my torsal,
The warmth of my scarlet rinse
Is forever lost, like death life is forever lost,
And Iam too.
Note: pardon the lack of single quotation marks, prodigits does not allow such characters.
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goth_lov 30.11.11 - 08:37am
Wow that's good :O
sry shy or I'd say more *
nuqi 1.12.11 - 07:59pm
Thanks Goth!Don't be shy...feel free post/comment as you please anytime, its always a pleasure to read poems and have a listen to what others think.Thanks Again. *
fanking 30.12.11 - 09:35am
wow, I don't think you have ever written a poem I have never liked. You are a good writer. *
nuqi 31.12.11 - 01:15pm
Thanks Chris..nice to see you here, please keep writing. *
